StrikeofLightning's Redline

Redlining for *StrikeofLightining

1: I may be wrong about the shape of the eyebrow, but the eyebrow to me was slightly off in my POV. Feel free to keep this the same in your picture if you think otherwise XD;;

2: The neck isn't supposed to be connected to the jaw near the front of the snout. If you look at some wolves' necks, they usually start near the end of their mouths.

3: The shoulder was far too low and shallow and thin which made your wolf sketch look really feeble and thin. Wolves are usually big-boned canines, and being feeble and thin is what you don't quite see very often, especially during the winter months due to their thick furs.

4: The front paws were too small and dainty in my POV. This perspective that you drew the wolf in made the opposing foreleg from being seen in this particular angle, which i concealed, but still can slightly see since the wolf is "lifting it" slightly as if he were antsy.

5: The elbow was much too pointed, making the whole foreleg look unnatural and gangly. It just didn't look quite right.

6: The chest had to be a little flatter since wolves don't have deep chests like a lot of dog breeds.

7: The hind leg was way too scrawny in comparison of the whole body. It looked like it was going to break if the wolf had stood up.

8: The tail has a rounded look to it, which you got down, but the way it's swept, i thought it would look better with more of a curve.

9: The tail was too short and curved slightly awkward. The fur on it looked unnatural as to the way it bent, so i added the tufts on the outer curve and added little on the inside to show some texture.

10: The hip was a little low which led me to...

11: ... the knee. It was high and sharp, so i lowered it and took the liberty to attempt (a bad one at that) a sketch of the basic skeletal structure of the hip and hind-legs to aid my redlining and hopefully have you learn as well <:

12: The shoulder blade was too predominant. I curved it down a little to where it would be a subtle bump. Pointed shoulder blades are only noticeable on felines as far as i noticed.

13: Lastly, the eyes. The eyes were too squinted. They were well shaped, but they had to be more "triangular" or "almond-shaped". It was very nice in the first place. I admire you for that.



Hopefully i helped you on this redlining, Strike ;; I enjoyed redlining your work. If you ever need any more redlining, just note me or something. XD That goes for everyone reading this if you took the time to actually read it. .3.;;

Anyway, sorry for wasting 5 minutes of your life XDD;;